The Changed Jack

       In this post, I am going to tell you a story that I made in a writing test.

The Changed Jack
     “Right! That's it! You have been late too often,”the teacher replied. The class stood in silence, meanwhile Jack stood up quietly. The teacher,”I am going to report you to the principal. So they both went to the principal and told her about the incident. Then the principal said,”Jack, I am giving you exactly one week for you to change. You must be early in this school for at least two days for you to stay here and make it as a habit again.” Jack nodded. He simply thinks it is danger. So both of them went back to the class and continue the lesson. All of the class studied normally, except for Jack. So after the school was finished, Jack went home to tell his parents about this. Soon enough, the parents were angry at him. His parents said,”You lazy Jack! That's what happen if you are lazy! Everyday you are always late.” The fact is, he was late because he is too lazy to go to school. Everyday he does everything so lazily. He ate so slow, took a bath very slowly, even if he walked to school, he is slow. His parents told him told him for the rest of the week, he is no allowed to play any video games. That made him shock. Because playing games made him too lazy to do anything.

      So the next day, he decided to change. He did everything quickly that morning, but he woke up late. So when he reached his school, he was too late. On the next day, he tried really hard for it. He took a bath quickly, and everything quickly. Eventually, he was not late at school. The others at the class gave him admiration, even the principal did. The principal said he needed to do that again once more then he could stay there. After he heard that, he became more and more relax. But the problem is that he became lazy again as he did every time. So eventually for the other two days he was late again.

      Then, suddenly he remembered that the time left was only today! The worst thing was, he realized it on that day when he woke up. He did everything as fast as he could to reach his target. But then, just as he wanted to go inside the classroom, the bell rang. Everyone in the class felt sorry for him, but they still gave some support. So they went to the principal, all of the class, and they all wanted to beg so Jack could stay there. Just as they went inside, the principal told Jack,”Jack, I will still give you mercy for staying here because you have proved me that you did your best.” Everyone was so happy about that news. They all cheered for him. When he went home, he told his parents and his parents were so happy about it. Since then, Jack was never late at school again.

THE END 
 

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